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The Ocean loves me,

She made me a bed on her shore

where the warm wind, the soft waves
and the singing birds
create the symphony of symphonies;

where the generous sun, the hiding moon
and the red rocks
make immortal paintings.

She gave me the low shores
so I can enter her;
a billion diamonds on her face.

She made me the islands,
so I can rest in her embrace;
she softened the rock, to show me her dreams.
©2009 *raido-ehwaz
:iconraido-ehwaz:

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Written on the warm, red rocks of Furuskär, Tvärminne, Hanko archipelago in SW Finland, where I work.

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:iconthenebs:
Magnificent personification. :)
:icondimager:
:sun:
:ahoy: Vackert ! Som vädret och sommaren hittills varit, är det nog
precis man så här man känner för havet och livet ... :hug:

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:bulletpurple:Henrik
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:iconraido-ehwaz:
:) thank you!

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I'm having a wonderful time, but I'd rather be whistling in the dark.

Scientia non habet inimicum nisp ignorantem.
:iconraido-ehwaz:
hehe.. exakt! fast nu blev det regnigt och svalt.. :D

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I'm having a wonderful time, but I'd rather be whistling in the dark.

Scientia non habet inimicum nisp ignorantem.
:icontrollgirl:
Beautiful.

Yeah, i cannot really comment with words on words.

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"If anything can go wrong, it shall go wrong".
:iconraido-ehwaz:
:) thanks a lot.

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I'm having a wonderful time, but I'd rather be whistling in the dark.

Scientia non habet inimicum nisp ignorantem.
:iconmoneo:
Very nice! I was going to say that I quite like the third stanza (especially "the warm wind, the soft waves"), but I'm also very fond of the fourth...and the fifth...

I think you've done a good job of painting several little vignettes to really capture the feeling one gets out there. Well done!

[Btw, it's not an ocean.t's barely a sea. I realize, though, that "The brackish inland sea loves me" doesn't scan as well (or sound as nice), so I forgive you. :P]

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Hold the newsreader's nose squarely, waiter, or friendly milk will countermand my trousers.
:iconraido-ehwaz:
XD "the brackish inland sea loves me".. i should write a mock version of this overly romatic poem - something more realistic. :p

glad you like it. :)

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I'm having a wonderful time, but I'd rather be whistling in the dark.

Scientia non habet inimicum nisp ignorantem.

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