literature

diamante

Deviation Actions

raido-ehwaz's avatar
By
Published:
314 Views

Literature Text

handle
opened, cold
push, enter, exhale
cross the line, find yourself
pull, insulate, inhale
closed, mild
retreat
a separate and joined poetic effort (shared theme). for & with miles ( Wordcore ).

task: write about a physical object without directly mentioning it, in diamante.
diamante: www.youngwriters.co.uk/types-d…
© 2017 - 2024 raido-ehwaz
Comments4
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Suensyan's avatar
Amazing rhythm. I really love it, especially that "push, enter, exhale"; I don't know why, but it flows like stream. And whole thing... you have catch something to it, I mean really catch. You are good with words too.